Jill feedback: Try defining each article by having a summary/title or name in bold or a different colour at the top of each page number. You need one morecontent number underneath the black line on the left as there is too much white space. The photo's may be too uniform in the way that they are aligned at the moment. Perhaps try tilting them or using a polaroid type of framing to make them stand out.
Luke feedback: It looks professional - the use of the red borders around the images as well as having the artists name bolder/bigger than the rest of the writing.
Sammie: the title of the page should be 'contents page' and the masthead of the magazine should be small in the right top hand corner of the page.
the pages of the storys on the photos would be better in a different colour.
the photo of the cover would be better in the bottom right hand corner with a slight slant on it.
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